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Missing Memories - art by Mikey Marchan at Design Pickle

Missing Memories

In the dazzling new Star Light District, rumors swirl about children mysteriously losing their memories while playing unsupervised. Haley and Robin dive into the heart of the district to uncover the truth, armed with curiosity, determination, and a cryptic music player that might hold the key to solving the mystery.

This story is number 3 in The Sounds’ serial, with Body Drop and Testing Predictions on an Abandoned Village being the first two. Be sure to visit The Sounds webpage to catch up on continuing stories.

UPDATE for January 17, 2025: This story has been revised with expanded details and overall improvements as part of the release of episode 4.


Haley and Robin stepped off the elevator, brushing past a sasquatch with deep auburn fur, a towering minotaur whose horns gleamed like polished ivory, and a sleek bipedal humanoid machine emitting a faint hum. The trio remained in the elevator as its doors slid shut, leaving Haley and Robin to take in the Star Light District of Aequus’ Underground Zone. Above ground, sunlight would bath the city in natural warmth, but here, the artificial night stretched infinitely across the ceiling. Pinpricks of light mimicked distant stars, arranged in constellations both familiar and fantasy, while faintly glowing paths outlined the edges of the vast, bustling new district.

Robin tightened her grip on Haley’s hand, her tone calm but curious. “So, how do we find some parents willing to talk to us?”

Haley slipped her music player out of the pocket of her pink hoodie. The rectangular device felt solid in her hand, its buttons smooth and satisfyingly tactile. Though it lacked the modern amenities of holograms or voice commands, the unassuming gadget offered something far more unique. The song titles it displayed hinted at the future and whispered hidden truths. After solving a murder at a concert and unraveling the mystery of an abandoned village, Haley felt confident that it would guide her again. This time, she sought answers to a peculiar story: children in the district were reporting unexplained memory loss.

“How do we find affected parents?” Haley asked the music player aloud, her voice low and deliberate. She pressed the shuffle button. “‘Guided by Angels,’” she read.

Robin raised an eyebrow, glancing at her girlfriend’s determined expression. “Well,” she said, a hint of amusement creeping into her voice, “let’s look for something angelic.”

They scanned the lobby together. Haley’s eyes drifted upward, mesmerized by the canopy of false stars overhead. Neon streaks, like comets crossing the sky, carved slow arcs through the darkness. Her gaze shifted to the walls, where golden, embossed vines shimmered with a lifelike glow under the soft lighting.

“Found one!” Robin said, pointing to a fountain with three statues of angels.

“Great work,” Haley thanked Robin as they walked over to the fountain.

Haley followed Robin’s finger to a trio of angelic statues presiding over a circular fountain. Water cascaded from their outstretched hands, rippling across shallow basins. Streams of flame spiraled in time with the water, their interplay producing a delicate hiss as the two elements brushed against one another. The air around the fountain carried a subtle warmth, contrasting with the cool mist. Together, the fire and water created a sensory symphony, blending heat and moisture, light and shadow, into a mesmerizing dance of opposing forces.

As they approached, Haley noticed a ghaukvoi mother and her child seated on the fountain’s edge. The child’s laughter rang out, pure and unrestrained, as he swirled a hand through the mist. The mother, her cerulean skin shimmering faintly under the artificial starlight, watched him with a mix of affection and mild distraction. Her cobalt hair cascaded in gentle waves, catching the faint glow of the fountain.

“Excuse me,” Haley said, stepping closer but keeping her tone gentle. “Has your child mentioned experiencing memory loss?”

The mother turned, her vivid blue eyes narrowing slightly as she studied Haley. “Yes,” she said, her voice lilting with a melodic cadence. “I take it you’ve heard about the news reports? Practically every kid here seems to be saying the same thing lately.”

Robin tilted her head, her expression thoughtful. “You don’t seem too concerned.”

The mother shrugged, her eyes drifting back to her child. “It’s probably just some prank or trend they’ve picked up. Kids always find new ways to amuse themselves.”

Haley met the mother’s gaze, her tone steady and devoid of judgment. “I think there might be something more to what’s happening. My name is Haley,” she said, gesturing to Robin with a small smile. “And this is my partner, Robin.”

Robin gave a friendly wave, her hand brushing against her denim jacket.

The mother’s gaze hardened slightly as she folded her arms. “What’s this going to cost me?”

“Nothing,” Haley assured her, spreading her hands in a gesture of openness. “I’m not a licensed detective—just someone with a passion for solving mysteries.”

The mother checked on toward her child, who was now enthralled by the water and fire’s hypnotic interplay. After a moment, she sighed and lowered herself onto a polished granite bench. The surface glistened under the artificial starlight, its edges cool and sharp.

“My name is Aura,” she said, brushing her cobalt hair behind her ear. Her tone softened as she looked at Haley and Robin. “What would you like to know?”

“Have you noticed any patterns in when your child’s memory seems to go missing?” Haley asked, her voice soft but probing. She added quickly, “Or perhaps with other children you’ve spoken to?”

Aura sighed, her brows furrowing as she thought. “Sometimes, after I let Uris play with his friends, I’d ask him what they did, and he’d just… go blank. Like the whole day had been wiped clean.” Her tone carried a hint of frustration, though it softened when she glanced at her son, who was now splashing a hand in the fountain’s mist.

“Is there a spot where they tend to play?” Haley pressed, taking a seat beside the mother.

Aura shook her head, her hair swaying. “Not really. They run all over the district—there’s no one spot.”

Robin chimed in, her voice edged with curiosity. “What about his networker? Have you checked its tracking data?”

“I did,” Aura said, her voice dropping, “but there was nothing. I figured the networker just lost its signal.”

Robin exchanged a puzzled look with Haley. “That’s strange.”

Aura shrugged, a calming parental acceptance creeping into her tone. “As I said before, I’m not worried. My mother says the kids are just being kids, and if I’m being honest, putting Uris to bed has been way easier lately.”

Haley bowed her head respectfully. “Thank you for sharing this with us. It’s helpful.”

Aura mirrored the bow, her expression softening into something warmer. “May the Goddess guide you in your quest.”

The fountain’s water and flame show concluded with a grand finale—a synchronized eruption of fire and water that sent a warm spray of mist into the air. Uris clapped enthusiastically, his laugh echoing through the open space. Aura chuckled, her face lighting up briefly as she watched her son.

“Wait,” Aura said suddenly, her hand rising as if to pluck the thought from the air. “I just remembered something odd. The first time I noticed Uris acting like this, he came home with a new hat. I asked him where he got it, and he said he didn’t remember.”

Haley nodded, her expression calm but intent. “That’s worth noting. Thank you.”

Uris ran up to his mother, his laughter bright against the quiet murmur of the district. Together, they walked away from the fountain, disappearing into the throng of visitors. Haley and Robin lingered by the water’s edge, the angelic statues watching over them as flames and water danced in the endless artificial night.

Robin turned to Haley. “What’s next?”

Haley pulled out her music player with a practiced motion and asked, “Where should we go next?” She pressed shuffle. “It says, ‘Put Your Records On.’”

Robin paused for a second. “What does it mean by ‘record?’ Like, historical data?”

Haley shrugged, her lips twitching into a half-smile. “Honestly, some of these songs aren’t even from our solar system. They don’t always make sense.” She tapped the networker hanging around her neck, its design a playful pair of eighth notes in glowing violet. “Hey, networker. What’s considered a ‘record,’ besides information?”

The device projected a spinning holographic sphere of rainbow light, which morphed into a black vinyl disc. Beside the spinning image, a text box appeared.

“This is the closest match based on your inquiry,” the networker replied. “On Earth, records are round discs used to store music.”

Haley swiped the screen away and grabbed Robin’s hand, pulling her toward a nearby information kiosk—a life-sized holographic projection of the district’s founder. According to Haley’s preliminary research, Iris Ironglass had built the community seemingly overnight, though Iris herself claimed the project had been years in the making. The virtual figure sparkled like stardust, her two-piece white dress shimmering with a soft, almost living glow.

“Wow,” Robin whispered, admiring the intricate folds of the dress as they shifted with Iris’ graceful movements. “That outfit is stunning. It looks so smooth, like real silk.”

Haley brushed her fingers along Robin’s arm, a playful grin spreading across her face. “You’d look amazing in something like that.”

Robin’s cheeks flushed lavender. “Please. Leggings and sweaters are more my speed.”

Haley beamed at her before turning her attention back to the kiosk. “Excuse me, could you tell us where we might find some music?”

“The Star Light District has sixteen music venues,” the virtual Iris replied, her voice calm and melodic.

Haley scratched at the short rainbow-colored strands of her hair. “Hmm. Do any of them play Earth records?”

“There is one venue—Celebration—specializing in records from Earth.”

“That’s the one!” Iris said with a slight bow. “Send the directions to my networker, please.”

“Directions sent,” Iris said with a slight bow. “Thank you for visiting the Start Light District.”

Haley led the way, her attention fixed on her networker’s glowing map as she guided them down a narrow corridor. Robin, however, couldn’t tear her eyes away from the towering statues that lined the passage. Their features were unnervingly detailed—eyes that seemed to follow them, muscles frozen in mid-movement, and faces caught in expressions too lifelike for comfort. Robin’s gaze shifted to a few static posters of Iris, advertising the district’s upcoming school, and though the sight offered a small comfort, it did little to ease her growing unease.

“These statues are… creepy,” Robin muttered, moving closer to Haley.

“At least they’re too tall to be real people,” Haley replied without looking up.

Robin stopped mid-step, her eyes widening. “Real people?”

“Yeah.” Haley shrugged. “I read this protector report once about a gorgon who turned people into stone for some kind of… artistic statement.”

Robin’s face twisted with a mix of horror and fascination. “I’m never looking at statues the same way again.”

The corridor opened into a bustling hub of shops and apartments, bathed in vivid purple light. Unlike the golden hues of the previous area, this section pulsed with youthful energy. Haley’s eyes darted across the space, landing on a wooden sign between a salon called Sister Golden Hair and a hoverboard shop named Landslide. The lettering on the sign read Celebration.

“There it is!” Haley declared, her voice brimming with excitement. “Let’s go.”

Children of various species darted across the playground, their laughter and shrieks inspiring smiles for anyone who passed. Some climbed over replica spaceships, their reflective surfaces glinting under the lights, while others hammered out discordant tunes on neon flower-shaped musical lights. A group played an energetic game of tag, their movements a blur of colorful clothing and fluttering limbs.

As Haley and Robin walked through the playground, Haley couldn’t resist hopping onto a series of light-up tiles embedded in the ground. Each step triggered a burst of color and a musical note, the sequence creating a whimsical melody that brought a wide grin to her face.

Robin walked beside her, shaking her head but unable to suppress a small smile. “Should we maybe keep an eye on these kids?” she asked, her voice edged with concern.

Still skipping across the tiles, Haley glanced at her music player and shrugged. “The answer says Left Alone,” she replied, tapping the screen for emphasis. “So, steady the course!”

Robin sighed but let the matter drop as they reached their destination.

Stepping into Celebration felt like slipping into a distant past from another world. The venue’s wooden walls, furniture, and tables exuded a rustic charm, while soft fire-glow lights bathed the room in a warm, amber hue. This blend of old-world materials and modern lighting created a cozy, inviting atmosphere, despite the anachronistic mix. In one corner, two couples chatted over drinks while their children huddled together, absorbed in games on their networkers.

Haley and Robin slid onto stools at the bar. Haley ran her fingertips over the polished wood of the countertop. “Smooth,” she murmured, admiring the craftsmanship. Her gaze shifted upward, locking onto a device perched on a nearby shelf. “Excuse me,” she called to the bartender. “Is that a record player?”

The tutelagion mixologist, a slender figure with iridescent scales shimmering like liquid opals, finished squeezing a lime into a glass. They handed the drink to a waiting customer before turning to Haley. “Yes, it is,” they said, their voice melodic. “Right now, it’s playing ‘Last Friday Night’ by Katy Perry. Though, if I’m being honest, I have no idea what she’s singing about. What’s a Friday, and why is it special?” They chuckled, their lips curling into a playful smile. “Still, I can’t help but love collecting records from Earth. Even though they’re insanely expensive.”

They leaned forward slightly. “Anyway, what can I get you two? Drinks? Food?”

Haley leaned in as well, lowering her voice. “Actually, I was hoping for information. Aspen, right?” She glanced at their name tag for confirmation. When the mixologist nodded, she continued, “What do you know about the missing memories of children here in the Star Light District?”

Aspen’s shimmering brows lifted slightly. “I used to think it was just a silly rumor,” they admitted. “But lately, a few parents have mentioned it—casually, like it’s no big deal. No one seems panicked, just mildly annoyed. Why do you ask?”

Haley’s expression grew serious. “I think there’s something bigger going on,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “I just haven’t figured out what yet. Does the phrase ‘Cowboys Don’t Cry’ mean anything to you?”

Before Haley ventured to the Star Light District, she directly asked her music player who was responsible for the missing memories. The device responded with the song title, “Cowboys Don’t Cry.” She nearly threw her device across her home in frustration from the cryptic answer. She asked for motivation and got the answer, “Mad World.” 

Aspen chuckled, leaning back against the bar. “Funny you mention that. Last week, Iris Ironglass stopped by for one of our Bloody Orangeritas. While she was here, there was this kid—a human boy. He scraped his knee and started bawling like the world was ending. Iris walked right over, kneeled by him, and kissed his wound. Then she pulled out this strange little hat from her purse, plopped it on his head, and said, ‘Cowboys don’t cry.’ Just like that, the kid calmed down.”

Robin clasped her hands together. “That’s… kind of sweet, actually.”

Aspen nodded. “Iris is a lot more approachable than people think. Oh, and speaking of that kid…” They gestured toward the window. “He’s still wearing that hat.”

Haley and Robin turned to see the boy darting past the window, his tan cowboy hat perched atop his head. The wide brim curved downward, casting a shadow over his face, while the crown was slightly indented, creating a rounded, pinch-like shape. As he moved, the hat bobbed with each step, its stiff fabric making a soft rustling sound. Without hesitation, Haley stood. “Thanks for the tip, Aspen. We need to go.”

Aspen gave a small wave. “Enjoy the day—and try our Bloody Orangerita next time.”

Haley and Robin followed the boy’s trail down the corridor. His small frame darted between towering statues, his footsteps echoing softly against the stone walls. Then, without warning, he vanished.

Haley and Robin slowed to a stop, scanning the area. Robin frowned. “Where did he go?”

Haley pointed to a large grate nestled behind one of the statues. The metal lifted up with a faint creak as she peered into the shaft, her face partially illuminated by the glow automatically activated from her networker to provide light. “Looks big enough for us to crawl through,” she announced, already beginning to climb inside.

Robin’s jaw dropped. “Wait. You’re serious?”

“If kids are crawling through here,” Haley replied, her voice echoing slightly, “then it’s got to be safe.”

Robin groaned, reluctantly dropping to her hands and knees. “I hate that you’re probably right.”

Haley lifted up the grate, and the two crawled thirty feet through the narrow ventilation shaft before reaching the end to what appeared to be a construction zone. She squinted against the sudden brightness of industrial lights overhead, taking in the bustling scene before them. Dozens of children, all wearing an assortment of hats, worked with an unsettling level of focus and precision. Some hauled materials, others hammered nails or measured planks, and a few even directed others, gesturing like seasoned foremen. They moved with the skill and efficiency of trained adults.

Haley and Robin ducked behind a stack of wooden boards. Recalling the clues, she checked her networker.

Haley chuckled. “Ah-ha! No signal. Completely blocked.”

Robin checked hers. “Well, I guess we know why no one’s been able to track the kids.”

Before they could process the strange scene further, the grate behind them slammed open. The sudden metallic clang echoed through the space, making both of them jump. Heart pounding, Haley turned around just as a small figure emerged from the vent.

Uris climbed out, his movements oddly stiff, and stood upright. He wore a black top hat, its edges casting a shadow over his young face. His eyes, however, were distant—unnervingly blank.

“Uris?” Haley called softly, her voice tinged with disbelief. “What are you doing here?”

She reached for the hat perched atop his head, but as she pulled it off, her stomach flipped. A pair of shadowy, ethereal hands emerged from inside the hat, clawing at the air before latching onto Uris’ head and yanking themselves—and the hat—back into place.

Haley stumbled back, releasing her grip. “What was that?”

Uris blinked slowly and spoke, his voice layered with an unsettling echo, as though two people were speaking in unison. “You should leave.”

Haley wasn’t having it. She grabbed Uris by the shoulders, spinning him around to face her. “Not until I get some answers. Who are you? And what have you done to Uris?”

“My identity was forgotten long ago,” the voice replied, calm and steady. “But I mean no harm to this child.”

Haley’s jaw clenched, her grip tightening. “Then why are you possessing him?”

“We are repenting,” the voice said. “In life, we made mistakes. In death, we were consigned to the Underworld. But one day, we found ourselves rising—drawn upward, sticking into these hats crafted at Ironglass’ boutique. When we shared our stories, she proposed this arrangement. We wronged others in life, and this is our penance—constructing a world better than the one we left.”

Robin placed a soft hand on Haley’s shoulder. “This feels like a wild ethics debate waiting to happen.”

Haley hesitated, her grip loosening. “Okay, but why children? Why not possess adults?”

A new voice, smooth and confident, cut through the conversation. “Because children’s innate sense of innocence and good keeps the spirits in check.”

Haley and Robin spun around to see Iris Ironglass approaching. She towered over them, her presence as commanding as ever. Though the vampire wasn’t wearing her signature dress, her cropped white hoodie and black leggings exuded effortless elegance, her every movement radiating poise.

“The children are perfectly safe,” Iris said, her tone matter-of-fact. “And we make sure it stays that way.” She gestured toward a nearby group of elders supervising the bustling construction zone. “They are under constant watch.”

One of the elders joined Iris, her presence serene yet resolute. The elder ghaukvoi had vibrant teal skin and long, silver-streaked hair cascading in loose waves. Her robes shimmered like liquid sapphire under the industrial lights, and her voice carried an almost musical cadence. “Hello, there. I am Saeris,” she said with a respectful incline of her head. “You must be the two young ladies investigating the missing memories of the children. Haley and Robin, right?”

Haley blinked, her breath hitching as her heart skipped a beat. “Yeah,” she said, her voice faltering slightly. “How… how did you know?”

Iris chuckled, the sound light but laced with authority. “Word travels. Plus, I have an ID scanner installed in the vent and knew we needed to have a chat.”

Haley stepped forward. “Okay, so let me get this straight. You have spirits controlling the bodies of children to build…”

“A school,” Iris interjected smoothly, gesturing toward the construction ahead. “Would you like a tour?”

Haley and Robin nodded. Iris and Saeris led them toward the halfway finished building.

“Okay, so if you’re just building a school, then why keep the parents in the dark?” Haley asked. “Don’t they have a right to know what’s happening to their kids?”

Iris met Haley’s gaze evenly, her expression calm but unyielding. “Because some truths are too difficult to explain without context. If we told the parents everything upfront—spirits, possession, penance—it would sound like a nightmare. Fear would blind them to the benefits of what we’re building here.”

“That does make sense,” Robin said. 

“We’re not doing this to take advantage of anyone,” Saeris said. “The children are safe, the spirits find peace, and the community grows stronger. This isn’t secrecy for secrecy’s sake. It’s protection—of everyone involved.”

Haley furrowed her brow, suspicion still gnawing at her. “But isn’t it the parents’ right to decide for their kids?”

“We were the ones who put out that story about the missing memories as a way for concerned parents to connect with us,” Saeris said. “If an issue arrises, we remove the hat from the child.”

Iris paused, a flicker of vulnerability crossing her features. “Adults don’t mix well with these spirits. It always ends… badly.”

Saeris interrupted with a single loud laugh. “That’s one way of putting it. When I tried a hat, I got sick from eating too much.”

Iris continued. “But with children, the process works. As the spirits help build, they grow lighter. Eventually, they’ll move on. I know it’s a mad world out there, but this… this is progress.”

Haley’s shoulders sagged as she exhaled a long breath, frustration and exhaustion mixing in her expression. Her hand instinctively reached for her music player. She whispered to the device, “Should we trust her?” and pressed the shuffle button. The device displayed the song title: “You’ve Got a Friend.”

Haley glanced at Robin, who gave her a small, reassuring nod. Then she turned back to Iris. “Fine. But if anything changes, I’ll be back.”

Saeris inclined her head once more, her serene smile unwavering. “You are welcome to return at any time, child. May the Goddess guide your steps.”

Iris smiled, her confidence as unshakable as ever. “I wouldn’t expect anything less.”

Haley and Robin crawled back through the hidden tunnel, leaving the construction site behind. Emerging into the quiet corridor, the faint hum of the ventilation system greeted them like an old friend. Haley dusted herself off and turned to inspect the grate.

“Well, that was… something,” she muttered, her voice tinged with lingering uncertainty.

Robin knelt to close the grate, giving her a sidelong glance. “You know, for what it’s worth, I think those kids are going to be okay.”

Haley gave a small, reluctant nod. “I think so, too. Iris felt genuine. But if not… we’ll be back.”

As they walked down the corridor, the implications of their discovery still loomed over them, but the motivations and end goal offered a reassured hope for the community. Robin broke the silence, steering their thoughts toward something tangible.

“So, with that mystery solved and the solstice coming soon, how about we run away somewhere?” Robin suggested with a grin. “I’ve been researching a couple of places.”

Haley reached for Robin’s hand, clasping it gently as they continued toward the elevator. A faint smile crossed Haley’s face. “Yeah, let’s take a trip.”

As the grate clanged shut behind Haley and Robin, the soft hum of machinery filled the construction zone once more. Saeris’ melodic laugh broke through the ambient noise as she watched the pair retreat through the tunnel. Her teal skin shimmered under the industrial lights as she shook her head with quiet amusement.

“What’s so funny?” Iris asked, folding her arms across her chest. Her sharp tone masked the flicker of curiosity in her crimson eyes.

Saeris returned her gaze to the project before them, her voice carrying a serene yet knowing lilt. “I thought for a moment you were going to tell them what happened to you on the day of the earthquake.”

Iris stiffened, her jaw tightening as the weight of those words pressed against her. She forced a scoff, brushing invisible dust from her white hoodie. “Some truths are hard to explain without context,” she quoted herself in her measured and deliberate tone.

Saeris hummed, glancing at the vampire out of the corner of her eye. “Yes, but some truths linger, don’t they? They have a way of gnawing at us, waiting to be spoken.”

Iris’s fingers curled against her arms, the nails digging lightly into the fabric. Her eyes darted toward the now-sealed grate, as if she could still see Haley and Robin’s retreating forms. A stitch of unease flickered in her chest, as if she was reliving the moment again of the young glowing woman on the beach screaming in pain.

She exhaled slowly, her voice softening as she spoke. “However,” she said, almost to herself, “I can’t shake the feeling that something happened to Haley that day, too.”

Saeris tilted her head, her silver-streaked hair cascading over her shoulder like liquid moonlight. “What makes you think so?”

Iris frowned, her crimson eyes narrowing in thought. “It’s not just her determination, though that’s part of it. It’s the way she carries herself—like someone who’s seen what others can’t comprehend.”

Saeris’s lips curved into a faint smile, her expression both kind and enigmatic. “Perhaps you see a reflection of yourself in her.”

Iris’s gaze snapped to Saeris, her expression hardening, but she didn’t refute the statement. Instead, she turned toward the half-finished school, the sound of hammers and saws filling the air. “Maybe,” she admitted after a long pause. “Or maybe it’s something else. Either way, we’ll find out eventually.”

Saeris stepped closer, her presence calm yet unyielding. “The Goddess has a way of intertwining paths for a reason. If Haley and Robin are meant to uncover more, they will.”

Iris nodded absently, her thoughts still distant. “I just hope,” she said, almost to herself, “that when the time comes, they’ll make the right choice.”


Missing Memories - art by Mikey Marchan at Design Pickle

For this short story, I knew I wanted to write another mystery with The Sounds. The concept of children missing their memories was inspired by the writing prompt: “Mysteriously, children are starting to lose memories. You’re a detective assigned to this case, and you just found out what is causing them to forget.”

As with past stories featuring The Sounds, I asked people to submit songs for me to incorporate into the story. Some of the songs were used as messages given from the music player while others were worked in other ways. The songs were: Cowboys Don’t Cry by Oliver Tree, Put Your Records On by Ritt Momney, Mad World by Tears for Fears, Left Alone by Fiona Apple, Last Friday Night by Katy Perry, Sister Golden Hair by America, Landslide by Stevie Nicks, You’ve Got a Friend by James Taylor, Celebration by Kool & the Gang, and Guided By Angels by Amyl and The Sniffers.

Thanks to Mikey Marchan for the story artwork!

Thank you for reading! Check out the next story in the series over on The Sounds webpage.

A Forgettable Retrieval - art by Janine De Guzman at Design Pickle

A Forgettable Retrieval

A day in the life story following a skilled thief on the Red Planet whose bloodline has been cursed/blessed to be easily forgotten. 


“Put those back!”

“Sorry, but these belong to your ex,” I explained without making eye contact as I stuffed the last book in my backpack. “Maybe don’t cheat on her next time.”

The sasquatch huffed and marched to his kitchen. Despite the apartment’s open concept, going to the kitchen was enough to put me out of sasquatch’s sight. The moment he stepped on the white granite floor, the sound of his footsteps softened–no longer in a hurry to get a knife, I presumed.

I stood up and slung the backpack on. My standing caught the sasquatch’s attention.

“Hey, how did you get in?” he asked, confused.

“You let me in to get me some water,” I reassured with a lie. The truth was I had knocked and barraged my way inside for the books. “Are you feeling okay?”

“I don’t recall letting you in,” he accused in a weak tone, questioning both himself and me.

“You should go lay down,” I continued. “Don’t worry about the water. I’ll just see myself out.”

Playing my movements calm and casual, I walked over to the front door. That was a mistake. I should’ve kept my eyes on him because then I would’ve been able to dodge the knife he threw at me. I put one hand over the wound the blade made on my arm while I flung open the door and rushed out. I channeled some serious willpower not to slam the door close, but I knew if I left discreetly as possible, the curse made people forget me easier. At least my blood was the same color as my crimson skin—no unwanted attention from bleeding all over myself.

Though I was outside the apartment, I wasn’t truly outside. Though, one could forget they were in one of the Red Planet’s underground cities with all the plants and artificial lights. Still, I preferred the clean, bright underground cities to my planet’s dusty, dark surface.

What could I say about Amber Hallows? This was my home. The whole city was fundamentally a giant building. I practically knew every path, every slide, and every blind spot of the city’s ten levels. Except for the first level, which was well-maintained with shops and tourist attractions, the deeper one went, the newer and more beautiful the level. Currently, I was strolling around the third floor, which was an older, more rustic section with mostly homes mixed with restaurants and grocery stores. Little to none in terms of art to cheer people. 

I took a slide down to the fifth level. Level 5 was my level, right in the center of the city. Upon standing up from the slide, a giant wrapping mural of random shapes warmly greeted me. A short walk later, I was in front of the door to my place. The door automatically slid open for me.

“Greetings, Ronvo,” Ibx welcomed as I stepped inside. “Was the retrieval a success?”

Ibx was the only one who could remember me—not counting my mother, Kira, of course. The anthropomorphic mechanical was explicitly programmed to remember us. According to the story passed down onto my mother, many generations ago, one of our arrogant ancestors was cursed by a god to be easily forgettable. This curse also included fading away from photos and recordings. Instead of being doomed, our ancestors embraced the imprecation, becoming assassins and thieves throughout time. My mother decided to make a pivot for good and only take jobs like retrieving stolen items. Ibx was our liaison for clients since people would forget they hired us.

“I got the books,” I answered as I dropped the backpack on the floor, revealing my wound at the same time.

“I see you’re injured,” Ibx pulled out the medical spray from the first-aid kit on the wall. “Have a seat.”

I sat down on the barstool in front of our kitchen counter. All the dishes had been cleaned and put away. My mother instilled a sense of cleanliness in me because a clean home was easier to tell if an intruder visited. Ibx spayed the treatment on the wound, cleaning and healing the cut with a gentle tingle. Seeing a doctor was hard, for whenever they left the room to get something, they would forget that they had a patient.

“Thank you, Ibx. Is my mother here?”

“No, Kira is currently out on another assignment.”

“Figures. Where do I deliver these books?”

“The client is located on Level 7. I’ll send the coordinates to your networker.”

“Fancy. I wonder what she was doing hooking up with someone on the third level.”

“She confided in me that she was curious.”

I stood up. “If I’m going to Level 7, I bet switch into something a bit trendier.”

“I would support that motion.”

After a quick wardrobe change into a stylish suit, I took a slide down to the seventh level. White and gold was a common motif in the art and architecture of the area. I preferred the more colorful artwork on the fifth level the best, but I liked this area’s cohesiveness.

I found the client, a female sasquatch in a white sundress, waiting on a park bench under a sprawling golden leaf tree. I stopped in front of her, with the books extended out to her.

“I believe these belong to you,” I introduced.

Her face lit up. “Thank you so much! I thought I would never get my books back.” She took the books and flipped through the pages, like revisiting with an old friend. She looked up at me. “Hi, there. Are you looking for someone?”

“Oh, no. I was just curious what you were reading,” I lied.

“Some old books of mine that my ex kept because he’s a cling. I just found them on this bench.”

I smiled. “Lucky you.”

Another happy client.


A Forgettable Retrieval - art by Janine De Guzman at Design Pickle

This week’s short story was inspired by this writing prompt: “A vain, self-absorbed ancestor pissed off a god and was cursed to have his bloodline fall into obscurity. Where ever you go people will forget you, images that capture you will fade, and your name dies on the tip of the tongue. A curse for most but a boon for a thief or assassin.”

For this story, I went on a sci-fi route and wrote about one of the underground cities of the Red Planet, which is part of the Five Following Planets. If I were to flesh this out into a book or write another story, I would revise the backstory to include the line, “My mother did warn that on the rare chance I encountered someone who could remember me to stay away because they would bring nothing but trouble.” I didn’t want to include this trait in the story because you might expect Ronvo to encounter such a person.

Thank you to Janine De Guzman at Design Pickle for bringing this scene to life!

Thank you for reading!

The Case of Statue Trail - art by Janine De Guzman at Design Pickle

The Case of Statue Trail

A freelance private investigator is hired to figure out if a client’s wife was transformed into a statue.


The sun was out without a cloud in the sky, but Psychon’s enormous umbrella protected him from the deadly-to-him UV rays as he strolled through Riverside Park. After his last job solving a missing person’s case, he asked his client for recommendations for scenic spots. They urged him to explore the park and smell the Blue Hibiscus flowers, which only bloomed during the day. He stopped and smelled the mild sweetness of the blossoms as suggested.

“Kay, you would’ve loved this place,” Psychon said aloud to no one. “Maybe I’ll get a shuttle to the Blue Planet next and visit the beaches there.”

Psychon’s networker on his wrist vibrated with an incoming commutation. He pushed aside his jacket sleeve, allowing the network to cast a holographic screen. A Karviná Uvae listed the incoming call as a job request with a nearby location in the park. He tapped on the green accept button, connecting the call, replacing the screen with a video of an ghaukvoi woman. The ghaukvoi were similar to humans but taller with varying shades of blue skin and pointy ears. 

“Detective Psychon!” Color returned to Karviná’s blue face like she had been holding her breath in anticipation. “Praise the goddess. Are you available? I saw you’re one of the best detectives in the Five-Following Planets, and this might be beneath you, but I really could use your help.”

“I’m available. What problem may I solve for you?”

Karviná turned the screen to a statue of a young adult human woman. “I believe someone turned my wife into a statue.”

Psychon started to walk in the direction of the caller’s location. “You know, you could call the protectors and get her cured.”

“I could, but I don’t want to embarrass myself if I’m wrong.”

“Understandable. Every interaction with the protectors does become public record.”

“Exactly! Plus, you see, my wife is part of the arts council. She met with the rest of the council to discuss some public art projects, and I decided to take a jog while she worked. When I finished, I came back here where I found this statue, and I cannot get in touch with her.”

I wonder if she is the kind of person to allow herself to be temporarily transformed statue for art, Psychon thought. No, judging from how worried Karviná is, she would’ve told her in advance so she wouldn’t panic.

“I’m not cheap.”

“Your rate won’t be an issue, especially if you save me from embarrassment.”

“And if your suspicions are correct?”

Karviná paused to think. Her worry shifted to anger. “Then I’ll want you to hunt down whoever did this.”

“Very well.” Psychon chuckled at her sudden enthusiasm. “I think I see you now.”

Karviná waved, and Psychon ended the call. Her outfit was the opposite of his in every way – bright, floral patterned shorts, a matching sports bra, and running shoes. Still, she didn’t have to worry about catching on fire in the sunlight.

The two stood facing the statue of Karviná’s wife. With one hand holding his umbrella, Psychon glided his fingers over the surprised facial expression. The texture of the stone felt like the work of a gorgon, but he had to be sure.

Psychon pulled off his pointy black hat. The detective decorated the outside with an eclectic assortment of patches he sewed, while the inside featured spatial revamping technology. He could store items ten times the hat’s size, such as his umbrella and anything he needed for work. He dug around inside and pulled out a material analyzer. The gray cylinder device was about the size of a flashlight.

After putting his hat back on, he pressed the device against the statue’s neck and tapped the red button. The device emitted three quick, high-pitched beeps.

Psychon glanced at his client. “Looks like you’re right. Your wife was turned into stone by a gorgon–a human one, to be precise. Does she have any enemies, Karviná?”

His client scoffed. “Sometimes she would complain about rejected eccentric artists, but she always made the matter seem like no big deal.”

The detective put his analyzer in his jacket. “Anyone who would want to turn her into stone?”

“I don’t know! You’re the detective!” Karviná took a deep breath. “I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to snap.”

“It’s the love of your life. You’re allowed to snap.”

Karviná smiled. 

Psychon looked down the urban wilderness trail, noting the other sculptures decorated along the path. Various species stood with nothing in common other than what he interrupted as an expression of fear or surprise on their faces.

“By any chance, do you recognize any of the other statues?”

Karviná turned away from her wife and studied the others. “Oh. I’ve been so focused on my wife that I didn’t realize someone turned the rest of the arts council to stone.”

“Let me confirm.” Psychon went to the nearest statue and performed the test. “Same result.” He checked another one. “Also, same.”

Karviná pointed to a statue. “I don’t recognize that one.”

Psychon tested the statue. “Interesting. Someone turned this person to stone before the arts council members.”

Karviná crossed her arms. “What do you think is going on?”

“I’m not sure.” Psychon kneed down for a close inspection of the ground, mindful of the umbrella’s location as not to damage the statue or get himself roasted. By the statue’s feet was a golden plaque with the engraving, The Horrors of Corporations. “Curious…”

Karviná jogged to the detective. “What? What did you find?”

Psychon pointed to the plaque. “This statue was deliberate. We should get the protectors out here to get everyone to a hospital for treatment. Once restored, they should be able to tell us what happened.”

“But that process takes time, and whoever did this is still out there!”

Psychon paused. His client had a solid point, and so he constructed a plan.

“Very well,” he announced. “I have a theory, but I’ll need your help.”

* * *

Karviná jogged along the paved trail as the route came out along a river. She hadn’t seen anyone for several minutes. She resisted hard to look over her shoulders constantly, and with the upcoming stretch having no statues, she was on high alert. The detective’s instructions to “act natural” kept repeating over and over in her head.

She focused on the river’s flow, hoping the sight would relax her like the waterfall white-nose she listened to at night. She took a deep breath to center her mind when a human woman jumped out in front of her.

“Hello, there!” the stranger greeted with an extensively cheerful smile. Paint splatter covered her long-sleeve shirt and well-worn white jeans. Only her rainbow pattern beanie cap was free of paint. “Would you like to make some art with me?”

“I’m just out here enjoying a jog,” Karviná stumbled to explain.

The artist pulled out a large knife from her belt holster. “But my project needs more volunteers.” 

The artist’s beanie flicked off her head as several gorgon snakes hissed to life. Karviná screamed, prompting Psychon to jump down from the treetops. While floating underneath his umbrella, he landed directly on the artist, knocking her down. He immediately handcuffed her, which neutralized the snakes.

“I can’t believe that worked,” Karviná said, coming down from the adrenaline rush.

“I already called the protectors to treat those transformed and make an arrest.”

“Why?” the artist cried. “All those people with increasing terror on the faces as they got closer to the big corporate complexes. This project was going to be beautiful. The stupid arts council would’ve seen the genius of my work!”

A pair of uniformed protectors spotted them and rushed their way.

Psychon gently forced the artist up. “Maybe next time, don’t build statues out of people.”


The Case of Statue Trail - art by Janine De Guzman at Design Pickle

This short story was somewhat inspired by the following writing prompt: “A man discovers that a statue in a public square has something strange. She seems way too real. He discovers that there is a corpse inside it. A detective is called to see this, and he figures out that every single statue in this square hides a corpse.”

I thought it would be fun to write a short story featuring Detective Psychon, who is a minor character in my book, The Crashing of Heaven and Hell, and from a TV series I once attempted, but still plan to do. Since I’ve originally published this story, I’ve written more about the detective. You can find all of them in chronological order on his profile page.

Thank you to Janine De Guzman at Design Pickle for bringing this beautiful scene to life. For inspiration, I gave Janine a photo of the Tulsa, Oklahoma rival trails. In my mind, as I was writing this story, I even pictured those trails. If you ever find yourself in Tulsa, I recommend taking a hike or bike ride along there.

The Clock Tower’s Purpose art by Henry Yusman at Design Pickle

The Clock Tower’s Purpose

A mysterious clock tower crashes into a sleepy town, only to become a silent sentinel. Reporter Auceon can’t shake the feeling something’s off. When the clock’s glow flickers out one day, his suspicions ignite. What secrets are hidden within the metallic giant? Will Auceon be the first to uncover the truth, or will he become another unsolved mystery?


A monstrous violet tower, shimmering with an unnatural metallic sheen, plummeted into the heart of Whiteridge. Screams echoed through the town square as people scattered, seeking cover from the falling giant. A high-pitched, metallic whine vibrated through the air upon impact. Fear was replaced by bewildered curiosity as the dust settled. There, the new clock tower stood, a silent sentinel twice the height of any building nearby, adorned with digital numbers the size of a delivery drone displaying the current time.

Auceon’s shoulders slumped in relief as he surveyed the scene. Thankfully, the chaos hadn’t resulted in any casualties. All the buildings remained undamaged except for a concrete patch that the town council grudgingly designated as a park. He and his journalistic colleagues searched for clues as to why the structure landed there, but no one found any inscriptions on the outside nor a way inside. A xhosian near the scene told reporters they felt electrical disturbances before the crash, but no one else reported anything unusual leading up to the crash. Early speculations suggested the planet’s guardian dropped the tower; however, when the press inquired, The Black Dragon denied any knowledge.

Months passed, with the clock ticking faithfully yet revealing nothing. Auceon clung to his favorite theory: a social experiment by a hidden cult. He’d once entertained the notion of a maverick artist whose grand statement involved the fleeting of time, but logic scoffed at that idea, as someone would’ve taken credit by now. One of his colleagues believed the tower was a stunt meant to scare off any shady criminal dealings. The town council was also clueless, but the lack of reason didn’t stop them from taking advantage of the landmark. With no answers forthcoming, the tower, once a beacon of the bizarre, began to blend into the monotonous humdrum of Whiteridge.

Despite the dwindling headlines, the tower remained a fixture in Auceon’s reporting duties. Every hoverboard commute included a cursory visit, a ritual that felt increasingly pointless. Over time, the usual park updates materialized: vibrantly colored flowerbeds bloomed like a scattered kaleidoscope here, a sturdier bench there, and even new playground equipment. Press releases flooded his inbox for each addition, a testament to the town’s dedication to beautification from the tourist-loving city council.

Yet, Auceon couldn’t shake the feeling he was missing something like other town mysteries, such as the bright pink bubblegum stubbornly reappearing on the same corner of the mayor’s favorite bench every morning or why some residents swear they hear the faint whirring of clippers coming from the long-abandoned barbershop. The tower remained unchanged, secrets locked away inside the metallic shell.

Today, the white glow that usually emanated from the numbers was absent, a gaping hole in the morning light. Excitement jolted Auceon. The numbers were always on display. With a snarl of the hoverboard’s engine, he rocketed toward the tower, his brown sasquatch fur whipping in the wind.

Another curiosity appeared. Three figures, burdened with boxes, spilled out of a previously hidden door at the base. A desperate scramble, a flash of movement as they vanished around the corner. Follow them? Or delve into the silent, now clockless tower? His curiosity warred with his sense of self-preservation. Following the figures could lead to answers, but entering the silent tower felt equally risky. The choice hammered against his instincts, but he wanted to see for himself what was in the tower.

Auceon stepped through the previously hidden door, anticipation twisting his gut. Inside, the answer to the tower’s mystery wasn’t a single device or inscription but a revelation that defied his wildest imaginings. Walls, ceiling – every surface thrummed with the soft glow of thousands of screens. An unsettling quiet pressed against Auceon’s ears. His gaze darted across the endless screens, each a window into a life unwittingly displayed. A baby dragon playing in a sandbox, an elder sasquatch watering her roses, a gorgon styling the snakes in her hair – the normalcy of the illegal surveillance chilled him more than any monstrous revelation could. Two monitors showed a human girl with rainbow hair holding hands with a ghaukvoi, a biped blue-skinned being with shades of blue hair, as they romantically strolled through the downtown district. Auceon concluded each screen was tracking an individual and not a location. The reporter felt sick, like a tiny insect caught in the sticky threads, and the thought a monitor was scrutinizing and evaluating his every action caused his gut to tighten.

“Hello,” Auceon called out. “Anyone here?”

Silence swallowed Auceon’s calls whole. As he walked up the glass stairs, the echos of his steps reverberated through the metal walls like a tuning fork. The next floor was the complete opposite of what the reporter expected to find. Gone were the sterile surfaces and watchful screens, and instead, a wave of humid warmth washed over him, thick with the loamy scent of damp soil and the sweet, cloying perfume of exotic blooms. Lush greenery, a riot of ferns, and hanging vines filled the space beneath a hidden dome that diffused sunlight into a dappled green glow. The air buzzed with life – the rustle of unseen insects, water trickling across rocks, and a hidden bird’s soft chirp. Soft leaves brushed against his fur as he made his way deeper inside. The unease that once prickled Auceon’s fur like a thousand tiny needles began to soften while in the calming space. What purpose did a greenhouse serve in a surveillance tower? Were people locked in here like a science experiment? Did this keep them sane?

At the end of the greenhouse, two unremarkable doors offered no clues about their purpose. One led to a sterile bathroom, the chrome fixtures gleaming coldly in the dim light. The other opened into a cramped bedroom with bunk beds stripped bare. No clothes, no clutter, nothing to hint at who might have occupied this spartan space.

Just another layer in this unsettling enigma, he thought. This story is going to be hard to write without answers.

Auceon trekked back downstairs to study the screens again. Each screen flickered with a live feed, a mosaic of Whiteridge laid bare before him. A cold sweat prickled his fur, which he attributed to the change of climate between the levels, but a part of him knew his anxiety was responsible. 

“What have I stumbled into?” he whispered, his voice swallowed by the oppressive silence.

Waves of static on a single screen snagged Auceon’s attention, sparking his reporter’s instinct like a jolt to the nerves. Why are you not working? He leaned closer, the silence in the room pressing down on him like a physical weight. As he moved in, a single name scrawled on masking tape beneath the display sent a fresh wave of dread crashing through him: Bravak.

The name was a legend whispered in hushed tones across the dimly lit corners of Whiteridge’s taverns. Bravak, they murmured, wasn’t one person but a title passed down through generations, each inheriting a piece of the town’s underbelly. Some claimed Bravak controlled the flow of illegal goods, and their network was a spiderweb reaching every corner of the market. Others whispered of darker things, of bargains struck with beings from beyond the veil, of whispers that Bravak could grant dark desires and wishes. Whatever the truth, Bravak was a name that inspired a cold sweat and a quickened heartbeat, a phantom that lurked just beyond the reach of the law. Some of his fellow reporters thought Bravak was a copout for lazy investigations, but he felt there was some truth to the legends. Whispers of silenced reporters and unsolved disappearances always lingered around the name Bravak.

Faced with an offline monitor of a notorious figure, the dread coiled in Auceon’s gut solidified into a leaden weight, threatening to paralyze him. Every nerve in his body screamed at him to run, to get as far away from this place and this name as possible. The story wasn’t worth death.

Before the reporter could react, the room exploded with sound. The door buckled inward, ripping off the hinges, and a cacophony of grunts and footsteps filled the room, echoing off the metal walls and shattering the oppressive silence.

A mountain of a figure filled the doorway, casting the room into a sudden, oppressive gloom. Auceon craned his neck back, a whimper trapped in his throat. A face, vaguely bull-like in structure, loomed over the relatively tall reporter. His skin, a deep, matte aubergine, reflected the harsh light from the screens in a way that cast shifting shadows across his face. The large, luminous eyes were an electric blue so intense they felt like a physical shock when they came into contact with Auceon. This was Bravak-he had no doubt. 

Bravak scanned the room, studying the screens before settling back on Auceon. A feral grin, wide enough to showcase a disturbing array of needle-sharp teeth, split Bravak’s scarred snout.  

“You,” his voice boomed, a deep tremor that shook the walls. “So much for discretion. I should’ve known a nosy reporter would sniff me out.”

As Bravak marched forward, the reporter’s heart hammered. Bravak’s monstrous hand, impossibly large, slammed around Auceon’s face, cutting off his air and vision. The stench of brimstone flooded his nostrils. The following deafening roar seemed distant, as if coming from underwater and distorted. Auceon knew this was the end of his journalism career, except for as a person in another journalist’s story. Then, blessed darkness enveloped him.


The Clock Tower’s Purpose art by Henry Yusman at Design Pickle

Thank you to Henry Yusman at Design Pickle for bringing this scene to life. For this artwork, the scene depicted takes place before the events of the story, back to when the clock tower first fell.

This story has been updated from my original version, adding more details, more world-building, and triple the length. Hope you enjoyed!

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